http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/ Thu, 07 Jan 2010 17:57:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/comment-page-1/#comment-365 Anna Og Mon, 23 Nov 2009 00:13:11 +0000 http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/#comment-365 its really good. keep the work up. its really good. keep the work up.

]]> http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/comment-page-1/#comment-364 anoushig Sun, 22 Nov 2009 23:29:19 +0000 http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/#comment-364 Interesting would have been clearer and easier to read had there been proper punctuation. You could easily refine your concepts and make your poem a lot clearer. Interesting would have been clearer and easier to read had there been proper punctuation.
You could easily refine your concepts and make your poem a lot clearer.

]]> http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/comment-page-1/#comment-363 soulguy8 Sun, 22 Nov 2009 23:26:24 +0000 http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/#comment-363 you wrote that?! thats a great poem! I really liked it, incredibly deep you wrote that?! thats a great poem! I really liked it, incredibly deep

]]> http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/comment-page-1/#comment-362 Sunshine Sun, 22 Nov 2009 22:49:12 +0000 http://desert-trees.com/868/a-poem-by-myself-tell-me-what-you-think/#comment-362 It's deep. And if it's really by you, we all know you're Lauren Edwards, or at least, that's your pen-name. I'll be looking for your next anthology at Barnes and Nobles or Borders. It’s deep. And if it’s really by you, we all know you’re Lauren Edwards, or at least, that’s your pen-name. I’ll be looking for your next anthology at Barnes and Nobles or Borders.

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