http://desert-trees.com/1628/please-help-me-title-this-poem-that-i-wrote-and-tell-me-what-you-think-of-it/ Thu, 07 Jan 2010 17:57:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://desert-trees.com/1628/please-help-me-title-this-poem-that-i-wrote-and-tell-me-what-you-think-of-it/comment-page-1/#comment-684 DVS Fri, 01 Jan 2010 17:22:16 +0000 http://desert-trees.com/1628/please-help-me-title-this-poem-that-i-wrote-and-tell-me-what-you-think-of-it/#comment-684 "SOUL -THE SAVIOUR" OR " SOUL INMATE"CAN BE TWO GOOD TIITLES. IT IS TOO LONG BEATING ABOUT THE BUSH.IT IS LIKE A POETICAL PROSE AND NEEDS A LOT OF IMPROVEMENT. “SOUL -THE SAVIOUR” OR ” SOUL INMATE”CAN BE TWO GOOD TIITLES.
IT IS TOO LONG BEATING ABOUT THE BUSH.IT IS LIKE A POETICAL PROSE AND NEEDS A LOT OF IMPROVEMENT.

]]> http://desert-trees.com/1628/please-help-me-title-this-poem-that-i-wrote-and-tell-me-what-you-think-of-it/comment-page-1/#comment-685 Maharaj K Fri, 01 Jan 2010 17:07:04 +0000 http://desert-trees.com/1628/please-help-me-title-this-poem-that-i-wrote-and-tell-me-what-you-think-of-it/#comment-685 Wow, that was really powerful. I mean it's kind of confusing but its still really good. It just makes you think...Titles: Trying to Survive, Breaking, Saving Me from myself... i don't know but really good! Hope i helped. Good Luck and God Bless! Wow, that was really powerful. I mean it’s kind of confusing but its still really good. It just makes you think…Titles:
Trying to Survive,
Breaking,
Saving Me from myself…
i don’t know but really good! Hope i helped.
Good Luck and God Bless!

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